Friday, May 19, 2017
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Hi Bailey I am Nirvana in rata class
ReplyDeleteI love this a lot this is so cool but you have more then one and in your sentence. Maybe you can say with Shyla like to play maybe it is feth or ball so that is some things you can work on but I think you can ctrl c and ctrl v a dogs purpose. bye
hey Bailey Milla here from rata class I really like but you have made more sentence. well done by Milla.
ReplyDeleteHi Bailey Kaunteya here.Like how you have told us about your friends and family.I bet you like hanging out with them right.Nice job Bailey.Bye.
ReplyDeletehi bailey it is dylan here nice job just add more adjectives
ReplyDeleteHey Bailey TJ here like your but you need more fall stops but you still don a good job on it. But keep going and try your best and keep going hope you have a good day at school well done keep it up bye now.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Baily, Ashrita here!
ReplyDeleteThis was a cool recount to read, I like how you set it up!
Shyla seems like a nice dog, I wish I could see er in real life.
Hi Bailey Tyler here.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used heaps of words.
Next time could you add some more.
Hi it is Siyona here I like the way you used heaps of words.
ReplyDeleteNext time could you add some more next time it would be better if you made a slide and put A google drawing on it blog you later.
Hi Bailey
ReplyDeleteSafiyya Here
I love your story but could you add what you enjoyed about it?
It reminds me of a dog who was abandoned and nearly died because of a chain it even lost a leg!
hello Bailey its noah just cheaking out your blog you should do link to the doc not like it is its hard to read it bye
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