I think fidget spinners should be allowed in class they are fun to play with i can do cool tricks you can play with them at morning tea. They make you angry. if you are angry they make you calm down because they make your fingers busy when you spinne the fidget spinner you get to play with it on the mat. It can help you with your learning because you can spinne it on the table you keep on writing what you were working on
I liked the way you...told me about fidget spinners and if you want it like you wanted it. Because you can do cool tricks with the and fun to play with. Like I wanted to play with them as well. Did you think about...putting more full stops and checking some spelling correct like you missed some letters on words. But it is really long and a good opinion. Also you put you don’t want it as well.Next time, you could...maybe if you want to you could write about only one like if you like it or not. Because you put both and I don’t know if you want them or not.like my opinion would be I want them in class.
ReplyDeleteWhat is your favorite fidget spinner. Is it the purple one that is on there.
I liked the way you put a cool Image of a fidget spinner.
ReplyDeleteDid you think about changing the Font Interior?
To Improve, you could add a little bit more words.
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bonjour bailey
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with you and that we are allowed fidget spinners in class because they are entertaining for kids. But I think you need to use a capital letter at the start of your sentences.