Tuesday, December 5, 2017
jelly park
Last friday we went to jelly park me and peter we kept on doing cannonballs and one time when i jumped peter went slap and when i jumped peter landed on me and he took me under water one time i bally flopped and it went slap!!! Then me and peter went to play with kevin to go on the dinosaur then me and peter went to go find kevin and we sore him fall of the dinosaur and i heard him go slap!!! Then kevin pushed me of the dinosaur then flop!!! .
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Hi Bailey
ReplyDeleteI like the way you added when you went to Jelly Park. You gave me a memory when I went there for a friends party.
Maybe next time you could add some full stops.
By Hayley